Oh Canada!

Who you calling a goose?

I have a good reason for not writing recently. I’m in Canada, which is NOT and will never be the 51st state of the U.S. I have family here and tell you they are CANADIANS.

If you go and have a look you will see I’ve made some changes to this web site. I hadn’t updated in a long while. Bad, bad me.

No, I didn’t bring Xelma with me, except in written form. she still resides in tropical North Queensland. In Book 5, tentatively named ‘Murder in the Mist’, she visits the rainforest area of Paloma, just as a cyclone hits and cuts off the roads in and out.

Though I’ve started writing the darn thing, it’s taking its sweet bippy time to arrive. The story is percolating on the back-burner at the moment, while I have some fun with family and friends. I’ll be back in Aus. at the end of this month, hopefully with some more of the story finished, if not at least raring to go.

In the meantime here are some pictures of this lovely land….

More later…Ciao for now,

OFFICIAL LAUNCH

Our psychic sleuth, Xelma, finds herself helping to search for a missing ringer on a property just outside of Charters Towers. He is found, but something is amiss, and as the Wet Season sets in things go from odd to weird to downright dangerous.

LAUNCHING!!!

At last, Dead Ringer Book 4, the latest in my Beaufort’s Landing series of Murder mysteries is having its launch, Peta the wonderful and helpful owner of Arcane Books in Townsville is allowing me to use some of her precious floor space for the launch. 13th September 9:30 am. I’ll do a short reading and be available for chats and signing. More details to come.

While I’m talking about the murder mysteries — here is a very nice review I recently received :

Percy, what sort of mind-blending concoction did you just slip into my coffee with Becoming Xelma?

We’ve got a dreamy psychic, a Krav Maga master, an artist with Parisian prestige, and, just to keep things spicy, an emotional wreck wrapped in mystery trauma, possibly packing a roundhouse kick and psychic insight while painting a self-portrait. I don’t know if I should cheer for her, fear her, or both. (Okay, both.)

...A prequel with this much soul-snatching potential should be blowing up Kindle pages and making readers cancel brunch plans… They’d love the art, the grit, the mystery, the psychic sass… and the fact that she’d probably knock out a man with a flick of her chakra. 

It feels a bit weird, such braggadocio! Lol…if it gets others reading my work, I won’t complain.

Enough about me—how are you going? Having some writing success? Tell me all about it. Have you read anything good lately? After attending Angie Faye Martin’s author’s talk at Mary Who Book Shop I recently read Melaleuca published by HQ Fiction and enjoyed it immensely. A gritty female protagonist always gets my attention, add an Australian setting, a gripping storyline and well-rounded characters and I am in!

I really have to go now…it’s been nice chatting but work awaits.

They’re Here! Plus, a not so quiet brag…

Book 4, Dead Ringer, hard copies are here and also available on Amazon and Books.by

There will be a local launch here in Townsville at Arcane Bookstore Tavern street, Thuringowa, who also are carrying the follow up thriller Daughter Of Anger and the other Beaufort’s Landing Series. Keep an eye out for date announcements.

The other good news? aAs in title above, I’ve received two lovely reviews by email in the last month for Ruth In Pieces…Yes, yes I am bragging…

Life is shattering — available at Amazon and Arcane Books Townsville


I recently came across Ruth In Pieces on Reedsy and was immediately intrigued by its dark, layered suspense and the psychological undertones that echo through Ruth’s journey. The mix of international intrigue, medical mystery, and a detective’s obsession makes it exactly the kind of story readers… crave, ….Ruth In Pieces’ unique appeal, especially with readers who devour tightly woven mysteries with morally complex characters

(Sorry, don’t know why this is so small…)

aannddd….

From the very first lines of Ruth In Pieces, it’s clear this isn’t just a thriller it’s a haunting character study cloaked in quiet menace. Ruth is a fascinating creation: layered, enigmatic, and drifting in the shadow of doubt. As a reader, you’re pulled in by the mystery but as a human, you stay because the truth feels dangerously close to home.

This is the kind of psychological thriller that lingers. It doesn’t just twist and turn it unsettles. It builds an atmosphere where trust feels foreign, and every action is stitched with ambiguity. It’s stories like Ruth In Pieces that deserve to land in the hands of readers who crave this precise blend of suspense, subtle horror, and emotional depth… your book’s global backdrop, atmospheric tension, and deeply human questions about guilt, trust, and hidden truths, Ruth In Pieces has everything it takes to capture loyal thriller readers

Seems my dark side can be appealing, lol…

How is your writing going? I hope you are getting lots of support, you deserve it. I believe in you. You’re amazing you’ve written, are writing a book. That’s amazing! Well done!!

See you soon,

Still At It

Ha ha ha I just found another forgotten post and have put it up. Now to finish this one…..lol…

I am still beavering away at writing and apologise that I’ve been so slack about doing posts. I won’t give a list of excuses but just say … Ok 2025, bring it on! Lol.

So, I have finished Book 4 of the Beaufort’s Landing murder Mysteries Series, ‘Dead Ringer’. Just awaiting one last beta reader and I’ll roll it out…. or at least get a proof copy. What’s that? You want to see the cover… oh ok. I painted this one especially…

Hmmm…looking at that now, I think the photo is out of focus. I will have to try again, but you get the idea, right?

I have started Book 5 Murder in the Mist, which will be set in the fabulous village of Plum up in the ranges behind Townsville. Surely, no on there would do the dastardly deed?

Good News! A new store has opened here — Arcane Books in Tavern Street and they are now stocking my psychological thrillers — Ruth IPieces, Daughter OAnger and a book of short stories Death, Danger and Dark Dreams.

This is a terrific new place to browse for books and other books things like book lights and gift items, Check them out.

Hope your holiday period has been full and happy … or at least bearable, as I am aware it can be a triggering time for some people.

Still, a New Year is upon us and roaring along already. Ciao for now,

Oh no I forgot to post this…A Brilliant Review

I have just received the following Editorial Review from Book Viral. The reviewer not only captured the essence of the story, but all its associated nuances and sub-plots as well.

Hiding out in North Qld brings new dangers…

“A gripping read that offers more than just a mystery to be solved,,,”

Here’s the short version, but I encourage you to read the full review, sites below:

“Escape to Danger” is a gripping read that offers more than just a mystery to be solved. It’s a story about self-discovery, resilience, and connection. Rose has crafted a novel that is thought-provoking and thrilling, making it a worthy addition to the mystery genre. Fans of character-driven stories with a touch of the supernatural will find much to enjoy in Xelma’s journey to uncover the truth and reclaim her life. It is highly recommended! 

Read theFULL and FULSOME review at these sites:

OR

http://bookviralreviews.com/ OR

https://www.facebook.com/groups/BookViral/https://www.facebook.com/groups/BookViral/ OR

https://www.facebook.com/Bookviral-208302829365066/

To any other author reading this, let me just say — this is a paid review (a pretty hefty cost), but from a highly credible source. The Services Manager, John is unfailingly polite and patient. Go and have a close read of their site. Sign up for a review if you like what you see. You’ll be asked for details of your book, they will go and have a look and decide if it is interesting enough for them to review. Can I just ask that you say Book Viral was recommended by me? Thanks. Oh, and there’s also a competition you can submit too.

I must away and get stuff done. Yours with a happy heart,

New Perspective on Rewriting — Overcome to Energised

Oops apparently I for got to post this…

Dang that seems like a long headline! But, I want to share with you a new mindset I have decided to develop. Having finished my latest book’s first draft, I’m setting out on the mammoth task of reviewing, revising, and rewriting. Now, it’s not that I absolutely hate this task, it’s just that it has felt tedious, time-consuming and tiresome. I have always felt, well, there that’s finished, brush hands together and get onto the next one. However, I know it will get better after the beta readers, editors etc., but before I send it to them I want it to be the best I can achieve without help. It’s my story, my responsibility.

I have, therefore, given myself a good talking to and am trying to look at my work with new eyes and attitude. If I slow down the narrative long enough for the reader to establish the character in his/her setting, if I make the reader feel the feels, sense the smell, touch the texture, hear the accent/music/forest sounds then they get a much more immersive experience.

I love it when I get lost in the world of whatever book I’m reading (which, at the moment is Boy Swallows Universe – what beautiful writing). Isn’t that what I want for my reader? Aren’t they supposed to say, as they close the book, ‘Man, that was good. I was right there!’

There is a lot of advice, out there in the media-verse, to just get on with relaying the story. don’t use too many adjectives, don’t take to long in the telling, action is everything, move, move, move…

Well, I beg to differ…I say balance all that action with explanation and explication. You can’t ‘show not tell’ without taking time out to trace the feelings, smell, noise, taste sights. Sometimes those things are so overpowering, so amazing, so awe-inspiring that they deserve an adjective or two. They deserve the deep breaths and appreciation.

Let’s stop dissing adjectives and adverbs, but using them wisely build our worlds, however small and seemingly insignificant, into places our readers can fully inhabit.

WHAT DO YOU THINK? How do you go about your re-writes. Do you toss out all those words and start again? Or, like me, go back and build little by little, more truth, strength and realness into what you have already accomplished? After all, I wrote a book! I mean, that’s no small task. Why would I bury it, when it can be re-vitalised, brought back to radiant new life?

Let me know how you’re doing,

Book 4

Again, time got away. I promise to try to do better. The good news is that I have started Book 4, but it’s not the one I planned. I’ve still got that one in the pipeline and will be starting on it after I finish the first draft of this one. For the present I have no cover, but ideas are bubbling away in the background.

Xelma will be moving out of her comfort zone, and will end up in Charters Towers looking for a missing Ringer. Of course, Donkey puts in an appearance, as does Ryan. You will meet some new characters and learn to love, or hate, them. As for Ryan, WELL…

By the way, if you’ve never visited Charters Towers, an hour and a half S.W. of Townsville, you should do your self a favour. It is historically significant and the old centre is picturesque and charming. Old buildings abound and open-hearted people will welcome you.

What’s that? You want a little taste? I don’t know…I don’t like to give too much away. Oh all right, just a little from the opening page.

What do you think? No mysteries yet, but a quick re-introduction to Xelma and Donkey. would you read on?

I have get on with the rest of my life, so see you next time.

At Last!

Yaaaahhhh! Just finished my last read-through of Book 2, At Curlew Cry . Now I just have to convert it, add the before and afters. Stick on the cover and Ta Daaa! ready for publishing, after I’ve checked the proof-copy of course. Then, you can read for yourselves what has taken me forever to finish. You’ll probably wonder what all the fuss was about as it’s quite a short one. Sorry about that. I am very interested to know what you think so don’t forget to leave a review on Amazon. You don’t have to write much, but I would love to know what you liked, or probably more importantly, what you didn’t like. Thanks.

I have been tossing up which to write next The Charters Towers one or the Paluma one. I think it’s going to be Paluma as I don’t yet have a suitable cover for C.T… and for other reasons which will come more to light as the year passes. I’m not going to worry about things out of my control until I have to.

What are you writing, or reading, at the moment? I’m always interested in what you’re up to. Keep up the good fight. I’ll see you soon…ish. Bye now,

Beta readers are a godsend!

Just a quick note, ‘At Curlew Cry’ is off to beta readers. It would have gone out sooner, but at the last minute I added another chapter.

Now, I have to get stuck into Book 4. Working Title—Misty Mountain Murder. Set in the village of Paluma on the range behind Balgal, but slightly to the north, up a very steep and windy road. some people get motion-sickness on the journey. Honest. It is so beautiful there and covered in rain-forest; full of birdlife, including Cassowary, and nocturnal mammals. What a delicious palette to choose from!

I have written a short story set in Paluma…and because you’ve all been good I will put it up here for you to read, probs in one or two instalments. It’s not a murder mystery, but I hope you still enjoy it. It has been published as one of the short stories in my book, ‘Forgotten Memories and other Fiction’.

PHOTOGRAPHIC MEMORY

The woman stood close, but not too close to her husband. No part of her body touched his. She artfully designed her stance to give the impression of togetherness. Neither did she have contact with either child; after all they weren’t hers and though they were biddable enough she really was too busy with her own affairs to be bothered with them. The Nanny was doing a perfectly adequate job without the need of direction.

The man, for his part, sat erect in his carefully pressed suit, sporting a healthy moustache, as all great men should. He chose to balance his younger child, Suzanna, on his knee. Showing himself to the world in the best light — an up-standing citizen, a gentleman and a caring father. Unfortunately, the tilt of his head and uncompromisingly upright stance, to say nothing of his smug expression, belied outward appearances to anyone with a keen enough eye and perceptive enough heart.

Suzanna was terrified. She had never before been allowed so close to the great persona of Father. His hidden hand shoved at her spine forcing her to sit straight and still.  She let her hands rest in her lap. Her nose was itchy but Father had already growled at her for fidgeting. She dared a quick glance at Sebastian, but he was looking like thunder and busy with his own thoughts.

Her brother stood, independent and furious, to one side. His lips pressed together, almost invisible and his eyes glinted, hard as emeralds. He loathed having to dress in this horrid girly outfit. He determined that when he grew up he would destroy all photographs of himself in dresses. He stood well out of reach of the man he could never please.  How he longed for the freedom he found when Father was away on one of his many trips, the latest of which had brought into Seb’s life this strange and aloof creature who Father insisted he address as Mother, but who was nothing like his mother. Sebastian stared out at the camera, searching for some morsel, some vaguely happy moment in the family circle. There… there she was, drifting, ghost-like, through his mind; almost faceless now, a hint of sandalwood, a red-gold halo of hair surrounding a kindly face, warm, soft — lost! Gone the instant he caught sight of her. He felt the new woman’s presence behind him, prickly and arctic cold, trussed up in her ridiculous new outfit. She looked silly and out of place in Townsville’s turgid, tropical heat, as did he in the equally ridiculous dress he had been forced to don for the obligatory formal, family photograph

He could hardly wait to return to the primitive farmhouse in Paluma, where he was free to do as he willed; run wild with his native friends and never, never wear dresses! Surely this visit to Townsville would soon be over, all the talk of Boarding School would end, as it always did, and life could return to normal.

The photographer milled and dithered around instructing them, in his slightly effeminate voice, where to stand and what to do. They, of course, ignored him. ‘Merde!’ He shrugged eloquently and ducked under the cloth behind the camera. He had placed the Fitzsimmons Family in front of the building, which was not really a building. It was a façade, as he sensed their happy family was.

Pierre used the cardboard cutout to give some semblance of civilization to his photographs in this desperate, dusty backwater in which he found himself. His sharp eyes waited for the right moment. The young photographer slyly caught the woman when her face showed some of her inner turmoil – her head lifted proudly, her jaw squared and her eyes hidden in shadow. 

**********

The photograph meant nothing to Sebastian.  He stared uncomprehendingly at it, then looked vacantly at the man in front of him… Possum, yes old Possum, his new mate. He had shoved the picture into Seb’s hands. 

“Knew it was you, but had to search out this old thing to be sure. You look just like yer old man, even have his bloody moustache,” ground out the gnarly old bloke in his tobacco ravaged voice. He sat on the rough-hewn stool outside his dilapidated timber cabin, puffing one cigarette after the other.

Seb reached up and ran his slender finger over the brush on his top lip. A puzzled look flitted across his normally expressionless features as he ransacked his brain for an image of his father. Nothing. There was nothing.

Possum scratched at his crotch. “I’m actually Arthur Benham,” he stated, jerking his arthritic thumb at his chest. “Name mean anything to you?” he queried. Once, many years ago he had been this boy’s ‘Uncle’, his mentor and confidant.

Seb lifted his eyes to meet the other man’s, trying to maintain his wayward concentration, which the past months in the Pacific Theatre had dissipated. His focus blurred and his mind wandered off on a tangent, then his body wandered off as well, down the path toward Rehabilitation Unit Six’s designated area. He still clutched the photo. 

Poor bastard, Possum thought.  He ran a hand through the wild thatch of graying curls that had given him his name, shrugged and lit another ciggie. Poor bloody bastard. Bloody useless war. Fuck the King. Gone are the good old days. He sucked on his rollie and blew smoke through his nostrils in disgust. Guess they weren’t so good for the lad, poor young codger. His father was a right bastard. A jumped up, pompous mug. 

*

Michael Fitzsimmons Esquire, dragged his boy away from the wattle and daub cottage to the dray waiting in the dusty street. Fitzsimmons had his little girl under one arm. She lay limp and uncomplaining. The boy struggled and called in the native Nyawangi language to his Aboriginal nanny, Leila.

“Save us. Auntie, I don’t want to go. Save us.”

She, poor creature, stood in the doorway trembling, wailing and sobbing her heartbreak. 

Possum was tempted to intervene but he knew starting a blue in centre town was going to achieve nothing. Fitzsimmons was a big bastard. Anyway, they’d be all right. He was their Dad after all. Never-the-less, as Fitzsimmons lifted his hat in greeting, Possum emphatically turned his back.

*

With a rattle and thump a truck chugged to a stand-still just up the street.    Unit Six’s sole truck stood in the middle of the road, steam pouring from its radiator. Shaking himself from the cloying grasp of the past, Possum sighed and got up to offer his help to the driver.

 A young woman slid from the passenger side, and spoke up to the driver. “I’ll walk from here and send someone back to help you.”

Laughter greeted this offer, “That’ll be the day, Love. She’ll be jake! Here comes old Possum. He’ll give me a hand.” Seb came level with the vehicle. “Hey you!” The voice called Sebastion to attention. “Grab the lady’s kit and show her to the women’s quarters. ‘N be quick about it!”

The young man shoved the photo into his shirt pocket and ambled across to comply. He lifted the case onto one shoulder and reached out to take the Lieutenant’s other bag. 

“Thank you, I can manage,” her voice smiled into his inattentive ear. His hand stayed suspended awkwardly in the air between them.

“Blimey Mate! Just take the thing to the quarters, will you! You’ll have to excuse ‘im Ma’am,” the voice inside the truck smirked. “Capt’n’s mad as a bandicoot… Shell-shock, o’ course. This bloody war!” he growled as he searched around inside the cabin for the truck’s crank handle.

During the short walk to the building in question, Bess tried to engage Seb in conversation.

“So, uh, I’m Elisabeth, Bess, Williams. Registered Nurse. And you’re, Captain…?”

“Nah, just Seb.”

They passed under the winged arch over the gateway to the Unit’s compound. 

“Army?”

“RAAF.”

“Oh, Where were you based?”

“Singas. Cigarette?”

“No, thank you.”

“Here you go then, that’s Maiden’s Manor, er the female sleeping quarters.”

“Thanks… Oh, Captain,” she called as he turned and started to walk away. “Where is Commander Connelly’s Office?” He faced her again, the lost look lifted for an instant. Bess felt the colour in her cheeks. “I, I should report to him as soon as I d…drop this in, I suppose,” she stammered.

“That’s the sick-bay over there. His office is just to the right as you enter.” He gave a lop-sided half-smile that had her heart skipping a beat or two. “And it’s just Seb.” Then his face shut down and he was gone.

“Poor fellow,” she murmured to herself, “And so handsome too.”

Sebastian reached up to his pocket to get another cigarette and as he drew out the packet a photo fell to the ground. He bent to retrieve it and was startled by the blare of a horn from a speeding US army jeep. He jumped out of the way but the vehicle ran over the photograph. Seb snatched it up. “Bastards!” he shouted.

He studied the mired picture — a man, a woman, two children. Something stirred inside, then was gone. He wandered toward his favourite nook in the surrounding rainforest, staring down at the picture all the while. Heavy mist descended rapidly and unheeded around him.  The foggy blanket had given rise to Paluma’s previous title, Cloudy Clearing (so named by Arthur “Possum” Benham himself). 

Only when Seb could no longer see the photo in his hands did he stop and look around. He turned slowly on the spot. The cloud was now so dense that only the closest trees were visible. They did not look familiar. He cursed himself for a fool and stepped in the direction he thought the camp lay. 

The sun was sinking, and the temperature plunged as darkness fell. Sebastion shivered in his cotton shirt with the sleeves torn out. He had to find shelter or perish. His sharp eyes searched out the buttress roots of a giant rainforest tree. He broke off some large fern leaves and with those and some fallen palm fronds fashioned himself a not-so-cosy lair.

He woke cold, stiff and hungry the next morning, at least, though it was still dark, a cacophony of raucous birdcall proclaimed it to be morning. When he poked his head above his covering of leaves he saw that the mist still shimmered amongst the tall, forest trees, a ghost army of half visible memories. Bloody Munan Gumbaru. The Aboriginal name sprang effortlessly to mind. Munan Gumbaru. He rolled it over and over. Munan Gumbaru — Misty Mountain…How did he know that? He shook himself. Whatever it was called, the fog did not augur well for finding his way, back to camp. His eyes searched the immediate vicinity trying to discover some small sign that he was in familiar territory. As he stood undecided, a browsing bettong scrabbled noisily into the leafy undergrowth setting off another wave of catbird cries, which triggered the rifle-birds and a multitude of smaller birds.Well, I can’t stay here, he decided. If I don’t move I’ll bloody freeze. 

There you go…. more next time, Cheers,